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Raymond Avatar Joined: 27 Mar 2008 Posts: 5591
Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 7:51 pm Post subject: A Winter's Poem
A very dear, dear friend of mine wrote this poem back in the cold of Winter. She gave it to me during the heavy snow we had in February and it seemed to express everything that dreadfully chilly weather made me feel.
Enjoy...
F*CK ME IT'S COLD!!!
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white wolf Ghost Joined: 07 Jul 2009 Posts: 105 Location: wilts
Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 7:55 pm Post subject:
The words are so short but it says so much.
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Raymond Avatar Joined: 27 Mar 2008 Posts: 5591
Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:03 pm Post subject:
Like I said, it explained beautifully exactly what I was thinking at the time.
Isn't that what poetry is supposed to do?
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Bravo Avatar Joined: 17 Jun 2007 Posts: 1506 Location: Stockton On Tees
Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:10 pm Post subject:
In one sentence it expresses both desire and emotion, wonderful wonderful. _________________
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Waffle King Avatar Joined: 19 Sep 2007 Posts: 1052 Location: Essex
Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:23 am Post subject:
Exquisite!! Manifique!! Excellente!! Bloody Marvelous!! It deserves a Frame in the Tate Modern!! _________________ I give you, the Waffle King
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Raymond Avatar Joined: 27 Mar 2008 Posts: 5591
Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 12:05 pm Post subject:
Tsk! Tsk! Waffle King!!!
Don't you know Tate Modern should NEVER be called The Tate Modern?
It's simply 'Tate Modern'.
Don't you read The Guardian dear boy?
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david hobbs Avatar Joined: 27 May 2007 Posts: 8123 Location: Essex
Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 12:49 pm Post subject:
Well to invoke sex and self in such a mysticaly spiritual manner is to me the art of a true poet
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Raymond Avatar Joined: 27 Mar 2008 Posts: 5591
Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 4:05 pm Post subject:
Yes - it's called 'If You Read This Book You're A W*nker!'
Once again, honest and to the point.
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david hobbs Avatar Joined: 27 May 2007 Posts: 8123 Location: Essex
Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 5:03 pm Post subject:
Well actually I don't need a book title to tell me.
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