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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 6:41 am    Post subject: Song for a loved one. Reply with quote

i.
Let the night envelope you
In a trance of a thousand smiles.
I am not known but for the courtesy;
Of the wind upon my lips.
In dreams seek the wild and near misses.
I dream with the wolves,
I surrender to the dark and the moon.

ii.
Let the oceans shower you
With their mesmeric song.
I am not there but for the mist;
Caressing your brow.
In thoughts find the paths hard and long.
I sing with the Ibis,
I bow to a long forgotten tune.

iii.
Let the lightning rage
Empower your being.
I am a distant rumble;
That beats with a heart.
Take all the chances of greeting or fleeing.
I talk with the serpents,
I hide in the woods whom I married.

iv.
Let the heavens above
Sing your praises.
I whisper alone old love songs;
Seek the avenues of life and their phases.
I chant backwards to a cow.
I praise the seasons of the sun that she carried.

v.
Let the world to such beauty be spellbound.
I am but a glance;
To admire your soul.
You will do as you will;
Take that, you found.
Pass me by !
I am but a near silent desert,
The ever shifting sand.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 3:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

that is so nice. wish i could write things like that
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 3:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Have a go!
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 4:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

you must be joking  i have to concentrate really hard just to write my own name most of the time
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 4:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's easy look....


I am Scot and very hot
So mind you don't get burned.
I met Ray the other day
now his worm is turned

We sought old Jack
Searched every crack
our search it did not falter

Then back to Ray's
His Gods to praise
And shag him on the alter.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 4:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OMG!!! LOL    He will kick off big time when he see's that LOL
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 4:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

He's a pussy cat.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 4:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your turn now!!!!!!
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 4:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

let me think about it
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 4:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You'll wear the inside of your head out you will
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 6:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I warned you Hobbs!!!

If you continue this baiting I will do a spell to make you old, bald and ugly.

Don't force my hand!
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 17, 2009 9:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Raymond I unconditionally apologise

Rivett rivvet.

Shit

To late Aaahhhh...............
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 17, 2009 4:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

there was a young man called david. whos words made raymond go rabid. he waved his wand and the hair that was blond all fell on the floor and the pavement. told you i was crap at this
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 17, 2009 6:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Trying is the thing Scott.

It almost rhymed
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 17, 2009 9:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Actually it wasn't all that bad. It sort of fell apart when you said "there was a young man called david".

Now, I'm all for artistic license but describing Hobbs as "young", I'm sorry but that's just ripping the piss!
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 6:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

LOL! do you two secretly hate each other? you seem to constantly rip lumps out of one another.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 9:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

We have a love/hate relationship.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 8:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Raymond wrote:
We have a love/hate relationship.


I love Ray he's full of fun

laugher wit  and frolics

But when he's bad he's really bad

and I could kick him in the 12345678

See


Love hate!!!! !!
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 10:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Raymond wrote:
I warned you Hobbs!!!

If you continue this baiting I will do a spell to make you old, bald and ugly.

Don't force my hand!


Now this is hillarious. I can't stop laughing after reading that poem by David.:)))))
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 10:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Have you seen his pictures?

I think somebody else has done that spell already.
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 10:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yes, I have seen his pics, that's why I was laughing at what you wrote.
You two must really love each other from what I see. ROFL!!!
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 12:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

dave-very funny...............

i remembered a little poem i made...........
its called a night out with dave.........

in an underground bar which was like a cave
i went for  a drink with my old mate dave
even though his head was swirlin'
he told me that his name was merlin...

his eyes had changed
he looked deranged
he dropped a doner on my jacket
which pissed me off-it cost a packet!

he said that he was Arthurs mate
i took him home as it was getting late
he dropped the kebab inside my car
you wouldnt think the pieces would stray so far

i was finding bits for months on end
thankyou dave my special friend

at 2a.m outside his house
with freezing cold water i was doused

is there a point to my story
a tale of ale,hope and glory ?
the moral of the yarn is this...
dont go out on the p***!

true story!


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